Very short and by no means finished. I plan on expanding it. The first chapter of a new story I'm writing is here. Let me know what you think down in the comments.
What kind of story does this seem like it will be? What length? What genre? That sort of stuff.
A friend who also read this said he didn't like the character names, I may change those as well. Thoughts?
I don't have any problem with the names personally.
ReplyDeleteI am sort of attached to Morgan's name but Stu is up for some changes still.
ReplyDeleteIt came across to me as 'You know what? Fuck what everyone else thinks, I'm gonna use the unorthadox name of stu.'
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